2007年2月12日星期一

My hometown

First of all,thanks Miss Golden~I know I have a lot problem on my English ,but i will be better with your help. "Breaking up" can i say "Dumping"?
Today i'd like to say something about my hometown longyan,you also familiar with this place,isn't it?^^
My hometown Longyan has a nice living environment,with an agreeable climatic conditions which is influenced by the sea,called maritime climate.(Is this sentence too long?)
Spring here has pleasantly warm breeze.In summer,the temperature is not very hot and nearly has a shower everyday.The sunshine is genial and you can see the harvest colour everywhere in autumn.Because of the global warming,we also have a dry and mild winter.(How can I make these sentences to be high-level?I think they are too simple,with too many "and")
In conclusion, the nature conditiong here is habitable.
The development of the economic here is growing faster and faster.Morden cars can be seen everywhere,like Audi an BMW.On the other hand,the streets here are still what it used to be,which means that they are too narrow to fit so many cars.But restricting car use would cause protests from those who are eager to show off their wealth-most rich people here like doing this.

2 条评论:

Daniel.Huang 说...

First mistake:
you are also familia with this small town.
Be familia with...

lemonscent 说...

yes,you can say dump, but you can only say I dump her or sth like that, you cannot use it alone